This Feeling I Have

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    This Feeling I Have

     It always feels like this,
    I never do anything right.
    I'm a failure at life, at love,
    and everything else.
    I get something new,
    it's broken within a month.
    I meet someone cool,
    they ditch me within two weeks.
    I make a decision,
    then can't follow through.
    So I sit all alone,
    and stare at the moon.
    It never disappoints me,
    rising every night without fail.

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    Doshima commented on This Feeling I Have

    03-27-2010

    A simple poem starting with failures but the moon comes to the rescue, good, innate flow of experece.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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