THE MOON DISSOLVED

6 Comments

Tags:
  • Erotica

    THE MOON DISSOLVED

     night crept through my window
    as I lay awake in
    melancholy disquiet

    the stars liquefied and flowed
    like honey
    sensually coating my body
    igniting me
    leaving me a glowing ember
    seething with impotent lust

    the moon dissolved
    pervading my senses
    with a silvery saccharine narcotic
    singeing my perception
    with smoldering hallucinations
    of eroticism

    but oh, the temptress moon
    smelled of your sweet essence
    and left me high with wanton desire
    unconsummated
    as night crept out again

    Poem Comments

    (6)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    redbloodink commented on THE MOON DISSOLVED

    03-20-2010

    this write is full of intensities..... awaking the human senses and perplexing the mind to find erotica....... red
    Reply to Comment

    bobarobbob commented on THE MOON DISSOLVED

    09-10-2009

    wow, i feel like i should smoke a cigarette. Great imagery here. I enjoyed. :o)
    Reply to Comment

    kittman101 commented on THE MOON DISSOLVED

    08-27-2009

    i simply love the creativity you put behind your words. i could never imagine reading such eroticism and feeling well lustful. but sometimes when the mind speaks we all listen, and you write so divinely. rthanks again for sharing
    Reply to Comment

    diggz commented on THE MOON DISSOLVED

    08-17-2009

    I like this, is this new? Very sexxy with a nature touch!! vEry good.
    Reply to Comment

    dahlusion commented on THE MOON DISSOLVED

    08-06-2009

    I love the erotic intensity, steamy longing, and the divine horny-ness you describe here, so much so that the tip of my tongue glazed over.
    Reply to Comment

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    litldeer’s Poems (31)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    CHANGED 0 01/30/2015
    Blinded by Sunsets, an into 0 01/30/2015
    After the Storm 1 01/15/2012
    Blood 1 06/15/2011
    My Picture 3 10/31/2009
    WALK TOWARDS LOVE 1 10/29/2009
    INNOCENT EXCHANGE OF AN EROTIC CONFESSION 21 08/01/2009
    FANTASY 13 08/01/2009
    EVERY NIGHT 11 08/01/2009
    THE MOON DISSOLVED 6 08/01/2009
    SUBMISSION 5 10/20/2009
    EMOTIONAL VAMPIRE 3 08/01/2009
    I was told 1 08/01/2009
    Never Smile Again 1 08/01/2009
    Do You Hear Me? 8 07/31/2009
    JUNKIE 5 07/31/2009
    Love The Title 2 07/31/2009
    Another Promise 1 07/31/2009
    WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE 3 07/31/2009
    She's On The Other Line 0 07/31/2009
    1 WOMAN WONDER 2 07/31/2009
    CATCH THEM 1 07/31/2009
    Undisputable 0 07/31/2009
    For You 1 07/31/2009
    Devil Child 1 07/31/2009
    BLAME IT ON ME 2 07/31/2009
    One day fadin into another 2 07/31/2009
    The stray 1 07/31/2009
    Stray 3 07/31/2009
    Truly 2 07/31/2009
    Outta You 3 07/31/2009
    Top of Page