WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE

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    WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE
    ive been usin again
    up in those clouds- heroin and all of this wondering
    well its all been finally concluded
    i will have my name 4ever attached 2 another one
    what keeps me awake
    and i know the fact that its mine - they dont make her smile
    but storys they- just like the limelight- they have there chance of re-appearing
    trust me- i understand it all- its the only path ive ever been on!
    hes on the other line
    n were talkin about a future- i have never known
    hes on the other line- just as scared as me"
    ive been wakin up - dreamin about odd things
    sunlights the only thing that reminds me im awake
    im a shadow to him these days- but i promise that ill be a great woman to him
    hes on the other line
    n i bet your sleepin- dont let my goodnight wishes pass-

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    redbloodink commented on WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE

    03-20-2010

    What is keeping me awake is your writes....... just so raw........ love the emotion passion and pictures your writes come with....... red
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    bforibus commented on WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE

    09-01-2009

    wow. this told a story of some many levels. i love that about this poem. 2 characters but with so much to tell. great no excellent job bambi.
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    SilverGirl commented on WHAT KEEPS ME AWAKE

    08-03-2009

    Wow.. such emotion. Such pain and confusion for you. I am with you, by your side. You are in my heart and prayers.. Hugs.. SG
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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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