Do You Hear Me?

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    Do You Hear Me?
    i have been writing alot
    perplexed with all my thoughts
    time just triggeres my emotions again and again
    falling flowers with no scent
    "i am not alone- at least not today
    i have got the sun- an i have got my pain
    i can still smile for the others eyes
    and pretend faulsely that i am brave
    pace my feet through the circles
    as i collapse this raging maze:"
    i am not alone- i will always have my feelings- my hope and my words
    there is little left to desroy- when glitter isnt always gold
    i am writing- my way of thinking
    the only way my cause can be heard

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    Trailmixed commented on Do You Hear Me?

    01-01-2010

    As human animal beings, ultimately we have each other.. even when worse comes to worst. Flight n fightin ta stay alive till the sun stops and grows to our belligerent souls
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    bforibus commented on Do You Hear Me?

    09-01-2009

    like a message in a bottle, just looking for a rescue. i know this emotion alll to well. thank you for showing that we can't be alone with this emotion.
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    kittman101 commented on Do You Hear Me?

    08-27-2009

    your words are indeed unique. i see and feel so many emotions within the poem, i wanted to read it twice. because the emotions and images were a lot stronger and felt more deeply.i feel the pain of struggle. i feel this as though i was the one walking down the street, looking around walking no where just to be walking, smiling falsely at those whom pass by. knowing the pain inside is deep like a knife continually cutting.
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    lustfulsoul commented on Do You Hear Me?

    08-20-2009

    A nice write. You are indeed a passionate poet. Good job.
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    jferclark commented on Do You Hear Me?

    08-06-2009

    You are wounded, but far from dead. Find the positive -- helping others helps you. Stay up girl! Good write.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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