The Journey

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    The Journey
    Ray of light shines so bright
    Clouds of sorrow are torn apart
    You are here within my sight
    I am racing towards your heart

    Life is rough but still I come
    Pushing through life's big road
    And there are pain, I still get some
    I will be the one to crack the code

    I know inside that I am young
    But I will soar just like a dove
    I must watch what rolls off my tongue
    But I know I'll say "I'm in love!"

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    rainyxsun commented on The Journey

    07-15-2010

    "But I know I'll say "I'm in love!"" Awwwwww. So cute ! :D Good job! This made me just smile. x) Lol. I enjoyed this very much. Give this poem to the girl you're in love with and she'll fall head over heels. I'm sure. :D
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    Tempy commented on The Journey

    09-24-2009

    what a beautiful read. I enjoyed it :) thankyou for posting.
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    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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