ON EDGE

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    ON EDGE
    I'm at the edge of a decision.
    It feels like the bond is worn
    What happens now determines the conclusion
    Whether feelings are torn or reborn
    Is it coming to an end
    Is this bond withering away
    Away into a void
    Is there nothing I can say
    I don't want this to come to a stop
    I'm really happy with what we had
    Can it not be brought back
    Was it only a fad
    Let the crossroad be for the better
    In hopes that this bond remains
    But if it were to not be so
    Sorrow would soon begin to rain
    I am paralyzed throughout
    I don't know what to say
    And yet I don't want this bond to fade
    Give me courage and let everything be okay.

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    rainyxsun commented on ON EDGE

    07-15-2010

    "sentences to cheer you up this poem up" ***** Opps. There's no 'you' Sorry I'm a grammar freak sometimes.
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    rainyxsun commented on ON EDGE

    07-15-2010

    Bonding with people is such a delight, but always keep in mind that it might run out of sight. ^ ^ Bonds that are meant to be, will always be there for you to see. Sometimes even if it doesn't seem that way, strong bonds will never fade. o.o Yes, I just rhymed a couple of sentences to cheer you up this poem up. :D [ weird ] Good poem though. Reminds me of someone...
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