LAND OF FIRE AND ICE

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LAND OF FIRE AND ICE

The land is on fire, people running amuck
Chaos is all around, we've all ran out of luck
Destruction rages all over our the nation
Anger is building, it's a burning sensation
The land is heated with our self desire
This is a our land, a land of deep fire

The land is in ice, people lying down
Death is all around, nobody makes a sound
Eerie silence is across our great land
Nobody is talking, it's a frigid stand
This land is cold with such deep vice
This is our land, a land of deep ice

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rainyxsun commented on LAND OF FIRE AND ICE

07-15-2010

I agree with the comment below me. This was a very good visual one. ^ ^

lemuwah commented on LAND OF FIRE AND ICE

08-25-2009

I really like the flow on this poem, and it's got really good visuals. Very nice description, made me think of right before and right after a war how people react.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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