I Remember My Friend

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    I Remember My Friend
    Hey, how are you doing?
    Its been awhile since we've talked.
    What have you been up to?
    Remember when we last walked?
    We walked to the swing set.
    We talked and we both had smiled.
    Do you remember it?
    The bond we had for awhile.
    We had good times we did.
    I am glad that I know you.
    Didn't you have fun too?
    Do you not miss the bond too?
    I remember the bond.
    I still feel the connection.
    Can you still feel the bond?
    Can you feel the connection?
    Its been awhile since then.
    The day the bond had grown weak.
    Even now I feel it.
    Hoping it will grow to peak.
    It has been awhile since we actually talked
    These last few lines will no break my rule
    I wish to say you might have been the one
    But that's too much, too early. I'd be a fool
    The next line will be this poem's end
    I will always remember my great friend

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    rainyxsun commented on I Remember My Friend

    07-15-2010

    "These last few lines will no break my rule" Is it "not"? Or am I mistaken. And... Oh this poem is connected to "My Happiest Moment"? This poem makes me miss my friends and uncle a lot. Things grow apart but in the end nothing departs. When a bond is made, its hard to break. Good job on the poem.
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    lemuwah commented on I Remember My Friend

    08-29-2009

    oh this makes me miss my best friend, you are such a good writer. :D
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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