Azure Eyes

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    i think it sounds better. thanks tempy for the idea.

    Azure Eyes
    I fell for those azure eyes
    I speak only truth, no lies
    Her eyes so deep blue
    The eyes of the sky
    I'm in a trance
    Hypnotized by her eyes
    It just happened by chance
    That I happened to glance
    Nothing new surrounds me
    Nothing else impress me
      I do not even see
    Others that pass me
    This is what catches my eyes
      Wanting to see something new
    I stare into the sky
    Deep into her azure eyes








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    rainyxsun commented on Azure Eyes

    07-15-2010

    Awwwww. This is a very nice dream girl of yours ! x3 I gotta say that this is very cute.
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    Tempy commented on Azure Eyes

    09-24-2009

    I like it U do :P I think it was a really beautiful poem hey. Can't wa to to read more.
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    luck4cookie commented on Azure Eyes

    08-31-2009

    I like your poem,were you talking about someone special in your life.
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    AzurePoet

    08/31/2009

    more of a dream girl, but inspired by someone in my life

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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