Soulless

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    • kitten732
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    Soulless

    If the eye is the doorway,
    to your soul,
    why can't I see anything,
    does that mean I don't have a soul,
    or is mine too small to see,
    I only ask you for one reason,
    If I can't see my soul,
    do I burn in hell,
    or do I never leave this earth,
    I only ask you for one reason,
    if I have no soul,
    will you still love me?

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    mary1644 commented on Soulless

    05-26-2009

    very good poem.........13 won't last forever. thank you for your insight and sharing your despair. I started writing at 11.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    kitten732’s Poems (13)

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