Slancha Ireland...

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inspired by my irish bride

Slancha Ireland...

pale skin
of the kind rarely seen
by the man
who never leaves his pint of guinness
in a random dublin township
eyes focused
on every last drop
to drown the tears
of the woman he cant forget
and the long trod home
the empty sound
of his coat hitting air
and the light she took
from his laughter
cold
bereft...demons left
to run like rampant fires lit
so many times
so many admissions
so boring, to die in this old ireland
no magic wand is greater
than the remembrance of a lovers sin
that last moment
when shes leashing her wantonness
her thoughts astray
like so many dogs and harlots
that young man
losing himself in the warm empty embrace
of loveless whores and emptiness
the long walk home
clad in darkness
taller than his woes
but half as priceless
waiting for his flashing eyed beauty
a return to unity
a morning after disgrace
in a less public place
with a grin on his face
but he knows its for shit
so he can only order a fifth
and drown himself in it

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danmartyjake1 commented on Slancha Ireland...

11-20-2009

Ooh. Pityful and sad those lost feelings are as described so articulately by you. Love can be so sad and melancholy, you summed it perfectly 10 from me.

AmadeusEx

11/20/2009

thank you once again, keep reading me:)

Artie commented on Slancha Ireland...

11-20-2009

Dude this is great! You took me there with absolute clarity. 10

AmadeusEx

11/20/2009

gracias artie, i liked this one alot, glad you feel the same

SavVySam commented on Slancha Ireland...

11-18-2009

The tale ye told is old tis true, but in you hands it lives anew! You've captured and conveyed a moment so well in the telling of your story! Very Nice!

SavVySam

11/19/2009

supposed to be your hands..oops

AmadeusEx

11/19/2009

thank you savvy, youre the first to read this one, glad you enjoyed it

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