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  • Lost Love

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    I named this one "repetitive writing" because during the time of I and my ex's break up, poems about hurting and wanting her back was all I could write and so, since they were basicly about one theme, I decided to name it as such.

    repetitive writing

    Someone told me that true love last forever, no matter the weather but, its always raining somewhere......

    Its raining in my heart.

    Once apoun a story book beginning, you told be there would no farewell ending and that didn't stop you from saying goodbye.

    Few thousand tears, broken heart, and soaked pillow case later, I still am not feeling any better. What you took from me was more then I could bare, now my skies are anything but fair.

    Its been raining here since the day you left, you must have went deft because you didn't hear me calling out to you.

    I guess its hard to hear during a thunder storm, that lays waste to my world and cause it to deform.

    But, I guess your skies are a lot less gray, after all your the one that chose to go and not to stay but, hey.

    No matter how fair the weather, baby its always raining somewhere.

    Its raining in my heart.

    Its pouring in my soul, its hard to keep it together when your one part left of a whole.

    What am I to do with no shelter and no protection, what becomes of a man when he looks in the mirror and doesn't recognize his own damn reflection?

    The rain drops in the window are playing tricks on me, I could swear that's you out there in the down pour saying that you still care. If that was true you would still be here, that I can see.

    Why did the clouds have to settle above our heads? I guess no matter how fair the weather, baby its always raining somewhere.

    Its raining in my heart.

    I can still see you dancing in the rain, those memories now only bring me pain but, I still play them again and again inside my brain.

    Tell me one thing, if despite the chaos, love prevails then, why our love did you let wither and fail? Is it hard for something so frail to make it through the wind and the hail?

    I know we could have made it, our love was stronger then the weather but, I guess it takes two to make a stronger enough barrier.

    You took my sunshine away and now my skies are dark, raining, and gray.

    But, hey, no matter how fair the weather, baby its always raining somewhere.

    I just wish it could have rained some place else.......

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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