Ashes.......

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    Ashes.......

    Ring around the rosie,
    A pocket full of posies,
    Ashes! Ashes!
    We all fall down!

    A fire was set and we lit up the sky. We thought we would be together till we died. Now, in the after blaze little remains. A pile of what should have been, leaves a charcoal stain.

    Ashes of a dream you burned away. Ashes of a memory that blew away. Ashes of a love that burned down to the ground. Ashes of a heart that died without a sound.

    Little you left me to shift through. Blackened remains of better days that I used to knew. Now, I'm on my knees with my hands black, trying to remold the days I will never get back.

    You left me with,

    Ashes of a dream you burned away. Ashes of a memory that blew away. Ashes of a love that burned down to the ground. Ashes of a heart that died without a sound.


    The bitterest thing you could say to me was so long. Now, I'm sitting here wondering how could you have moved on?

    The words you say to him sound familiar, like I heard them before? Maybe, its because you used to say them to me....

    After everything, why did the love of you and I, had to die? This question burns a hole in my mind, why did our time together have to unwind? All my hopes and dreams have been torn, your new baby should have been my first born.....


    A ruined waste land has became my heart. Each piece of it has fell apart and I feel I can never rebuild it. Thoughts of you creep inside my slumber and I still dream of you. Every memory we shared together all seems to few.

    We should have made more. Now, the only thing that's left are;


    Ashes of a dream you burned away. Ashes of a memory that blew away. Ashes of a love that burned down to the ground. Ashes of a heart that died without a sound.

    You lit the fire that ignited this love story and now, you have set a blaze of the house you helped built.

    My foudations werent made to with stand this and Ill always suffer from the burns of reminisce.......

    In the end there was nothing I could do but, watch it all go up in flames. Some fires just cant be tamed....

    Ashes of a dream you burned away. Ashes of a memory that blew away. Ashes of a love that burned down to the ground. Ashes of a heart that died without a sound.

    Your love reminds the greatest I ever knew and even though you don't want to hear it, Ill always be in love with you...

    A Love that became dreary, left a pocket full of misery. Ashes, ashes, it all fell apart.....

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    TheLastCowboy commented on Ashes.......

    01-26-2013

    Dam good poem, wow I wish I had thought of this write before you had, you paint the perfect picture with your words! How I can relate to your words. Thanks for the great read. Hands down this is a 10!!!

    keashiadavis commented on Ashes.......

    01-22-2009

    you know what that is one of the most outstanding poems i have ever read in my life i love it and i am sorry that she left you like that

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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