Love Poem

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    I wrote this to a girl I was intrested in at the time.

    Love Poem

                              "Love Poem...."

     

    You are wonderful to know and I wrote this, so of my feelings you will better know.

     

    I think your a shooting star, one that can be seen bright and far.

     

    Your a one in a million and its my heart, you are stealin.

     

    I care about you deeply, pure and completely.

     

    Your lips are of sweetest taste and your skin is as soft as lace.

     

    A kiss form you, could never be sour.

     

    Your touch is heavenly and your personality is anything but ordinary.

     

    I want to taste your skin, Start with your lips and move stright past your chin.

     

    Your body I would love to  devour.

     

    Your a delight to the eye, a true pleasure by and by.

     

    Your beautiful, thats true, I wouldnt lie to you.

     

    It is a view I could always scour.

     

    Your voice is like a symphony, it feels my ears with prefect harmony.

     

    I could listen to it for hours.

     

    I want a chance to be yours, when your ready again to open up those doors.

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    eerickson4037 commented on Love Poem

    06-13-2014

    I read a lot of your other stuff and im really surprised to see the spectrum of different poetry you create. you can go from this to your poem, "my monster" to your poem, "think of me..." its amazing and I really love your work. keep posting :)

    Monkeybone316

    01/05/2015

    Thank you very much, I really appreciate that. I believe its good not to be one sided and I try to demonstrate that through my work.

    DarkAngel316 commented on Love Poem

    03-11-2014

    I've always loved this poem. Now it's time to add "our" poem. The one in my wallet. O:) Love you!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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