Rape

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    It took me a long time to decide on whether to post this poem.  But, I decided it might help someone else not feel so alone.  We cant be ashamed of what someone else did.  Thanks for reading it.

    Rape

    In my mind I hide and wait,
    wondering why this was my fate.
    I feel nothing, its cold in here.
    I see darkness very clear.

    Let it happen, dont hesitate,
    Hope its done before its too late.
    Silent, escaping, thoughts run free.
    I look at her the very likes of me.

    He can have her, shes nothing to me,
    Just a front,  me he cannot see.
    The best of me is not within his range,
    Shes an escape and its all very strange.

    I didnt take very good care of her,
    Now she lays and has to let this occur.
    I let him in and she pays the price,
    His wicked ways and I was enticed.

    I will lose her later,
    Be glad God made her,
    Many facets and faces,
    Many times and many places.

    All for the love of the hater.

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    Sx9 commented on Rape

    07-29-2010

    beautiful ways of vibesin sorrow,,never easy when u open ur eyes and still there,life still hope,,yes god is good,,walk good.
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    optimistic commented on Rape

    07-23-2009

    Different way of expressing pain I like the flow of this poem so much darkness and sad descriptions of an un ruley nightmare.
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    BlacknWhite

    07/29/2010

    Thank you for the comments. I have been absent for awhile. Just wanted to say thanks.

    1990lh commented on Rape

    07-18-2009

    wow great poem it is full of so much emotion sadness and yet pride i love it
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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