Superliminal

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If you are a pervert, you will see naughty stars. If you claim otherwise, then you're simply making a vain attempt to gain my approval. That is the norm. I have to be frank sometimes, you know.  HAHA...

This is a sizzling piece. I wonder what it means!!

Good luck to all you callous curmudgeons who have the audacity to pick and prod at my work pretending to know exactly what I am talking about.

Enjoy!

Superliminal

 

A serrated pillar plows Medusa's cave
The pink camel drinks from a blue needle
The gun fighter aims his cannon, Ho!
Sliding spear into catatonic cat; layered tongue.
A rose mouth suckling a thick sum of stem
Winter vinegar, stubble hair, sweat crystals
Long root propagating bittersweet pudenda
A contumacious flesh fort; porous tessellation.
Black and white frame-shift. Mingling corporeal artifice.
Peach fuzzed timbers. Sipping. Yeilding to a sword
Bristle fibered. Iris chasm creaking. Quick. Callous.
Hot pant! Palpated paragon. Raisin bull’s-eye cleft
And the keen dagger pulses its sublingual heart
Brewing a cauldron of honeydew liquor
Streaming a frothy fountain of tepid, piquant pus
‘Mallow cream shining on a turgid, tactile tentacle.
It butchers the raw friction-feeding cove with a
goliath, guttural clim-axe.

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euri commented on Superliminal

12-28-2009

WOW!!! sizzling indeed.. Very good imagination and use of words!

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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