Coco_Nut

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    HAHA! I don't know how much more suggestive language this poem could possibly hold! You can either interpret this one as risque or resplendent.

    Coco_Nut

    Coconuts are the hardest fruits to crack
    They’ll spin you round no matter how hard you whack
    The coconut will bust and its juices spew
    Tasty yes, but is its meat meant for you?
    No way to tell as the coconut lies
    On its back with its hairy, white, fibrous eyes
    A contradiction in disguise
    Petty are its layers, forgiving in sweet surprise
    One coconut for me, this time I hacked it in two
    Split, the fruit lies, dripping with dew
    Meshed between the coarse strings tough
    Coconut may say it has had enough
    With one touch
    It will turn and spit
    More juice in my eye
    And at last its pitless pit

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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