No One Sees

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    everyone thinks they know you, but they never take the time to really look at you.

    No One Sees

    To many times people think,
    You've got nothing to cry about.
    You've got a loving boyfriend,
    And the sweetest baby.
    What else could you want?
    But they just don't see.
    That you hide you're emotions,
    Cause they say that's not the way you're
    suppose to feel.
    They don't see the loneliness,
    That's so hard to conceal.
    But if they could only walk one day,
    In the shoes you wear.
    Then they would finally see,
    The burden that you bare.
    But until they do,
    They will never understand why,
    You have to fight for you're happiness,
    Every damn day and night. 


                                                             08-12-09

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    Troubador commented on No One Sees

    08-25-2009

    This is a stunning piece of writing you respect your reader while at the same time unloading your burdens into nyour words. You tell it like it is or should be. I would like for everyone to see this and really read it into their very soul. Great job I only give out a 10 to poems that are extraordinary in their scope as well as literate in content as well as meaning, good job.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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