It's Not Really Good-Bye

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  • melanie23
  • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

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i was a speaker at my grandpa's funeral and ive never been good at that so i wrote it down instead. i hope i made him proud.

It's Not Really Good-Bye

Our hearts feel broken.
Our piece of mind is shattered beyond belief,
Because we lost a dear loved one.
But none of that matters to our dening hearts beneath.

His peace has now come,
For his pain is gone forever.
He his held by the arms of our Lord,
Looking down as our loved one and as our protecter.

But he is not really gone,
And never will be.
His lives on in our hearts,
And his spirit soars free.


                                                             To my grandpa
                                                                     2004

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nadronnoco commented on It's Not Really Good-Bye

08-21-2009

sorry for your loss., and your writing feels like its comming from the heart and true though there pain is gone it is left behind that suffer when they leave.....Best wishes

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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