I've Moved On

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  • melanie23
  • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

I've Moved On

Iv'e moved on.
I knew that I would.
It just took some time,
To prove that I could.

I admit that I cried,
But just for awhile.
You thoght I was stuck on you.
Sorry, that's just not my style.

I just thought I would tell you,
That I have moved on.
I'll find someone who will love me,
Because I was taught to be strong.

               
                                                                         2001

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ripper commented on I've Moved On

08-21-2009

Yeah!!! Girl power! (or woman power if you prefer). Ilike this. and I have a freind that could stand to see it. Reminds me of the line from Our Bodies Ourselves. A woman needs a man like a Fish needs a bicycle. kudos

Troubador commented on I've Moved On

08-21-2009

This is a great poem of strength though the rhyme scheme was a little choppy I liked the way that you dissed him in the second stanza way to go girl. This piece definately proves the pen/keyboard is indeed mightier than the sword.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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