I've Moved On

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  • melanie23
  • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

I've Moved On

Iv'e moved on.
I knew that I would.
It just took some time,
To prove that I could.

I admit that I cried,
But just for awhile.
You thoght I was stuck on you.
Sorry, that's just not my style.

I just thought I would tell you,
That I have moved on.
I'll find someone who will love me,
Because I was taught to be strong.

               
                                                                         2001

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ripper commented on I've Moved On

08-21-2009

Yeah!!! Girl power! (or woman power if you prefer). Ilike this. and I have a freind that could stand to see it. Reminds me of the line from Our Bodies Ourselves. A woman needs a man like a Fish needs a bicycle. kudos

Troubador commented on I've Moved On

08-21-2009

This is a great poem of strength though the rhyme scheme was a little choppy I liked the way that you dissed him in the second stanza way to go girl. This piece definately proves the pen/keyboard is indeed mightier than the sword.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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