My Load

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    My Load

     Don't lighten my load, Just make me stronger!
    Help me hold on alittle bit longer.
    Hold out your hand to guide me,
    Don't lighten my load just walk beside me.

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    Dreamer123 commented on My Load

    07-27-2009

    this awesome! Gucci you rock. this is really helpful this is amazing. :D keep up the great work
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    GucciGurl

    07/28/2009

    Im glad you enjoyed this . I hope u take the time to read some more of my work. This piece is the way I really feel I dont want it taken away I just want someone to be thee for me

    optimistic commented on My Load

    07-16-2009

    Great version of courage and strength to move forward from past horror. some one is there to do so I think sometimes it even hard for me to see.
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    GucciGurl

    07/28/2009

    Thank u for your comment. We all need someone there to help us thru the bad times

    frankson03 commented on My Load

    07-15-2009

    yeah,, short but right to the point,, dont make life easy for me, just walk right beside me,, but i will carry the wieght i brought on myself,, i like that alot.. good job..
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    GucciGurl

    07/16/2009

    You no that sometimes it is best not to give someone your load but just let them be there 4 you. This is how we learn and grow.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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