My Complaint, My Fault

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My Complaint, My Fault

He breaks my heart, He breaks my heart.
My world seems so torn apart. I try, and
I try not to cry. It's rare these days to
even see my eyes dry.

Sometimes it's not the words that he may say.
But instead what he may display.
I've held on so long and each night I pray,
 I go on wishing, hoping tomorrow will be a different
 kind of day, a day I'd hope to stay that way.

I don't understand how my man could not care.
Make me stress and lose my hair. If he were me,
would he think I was fair, relay how I dare?

This is not an easy task, as he holds my
wiltered heart in his grasp.

It could be so simple to say good-bye.
Yet, I can't, because of our tie.
So I continue to live a lie.

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Qualin commented on My Complaint, My Fault

03-27-2012

the rythm and rhym is good from a female setting here like the poem very much....I have to think about it...good job

Qualin commented on My Complaint, My Fault

03-22-2012

I can't imagine this being from the heart but if so...IS HE KRAZY? May be that he needs to see a Dr. one that specialises in the Krazies!! Good write

sandyb

03/26/2012

This is true, I life I've lived for nearly 20 yrs. And yes he is Krazy..

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Unchanged Routine 1
Only When I'm Alone 2
Harsh Reality of Love Denied 1
Searching For My Someday 6
Like Me 1
Going Under 2
A Fools Tool 6
Just Another Day 9
A Redo 3
Let It Go 2
Missed Chances 3
These Questions 1
You Remind Me 1
Whispers In The Wind 4
Treasured Beauty 1
Only In My Dreams 4
My Complaint, My Fault 2
Masked Man 0
Open Your Heart and Let Love In 4
What Ifs 7
Out of the Blue 3
Love's Chore 4
The one I once adored, I now despise. 4
Quenching Desire 6
Breathing Space 5
HARD TO SAY GOOD-BYE 5
VOWS OF DELUSION 2
Home Invader 6
WHAT'S LEFT OF ME 2
Offender of Love 3
Get a job 4
Tips for the Road 2
Devine Loss 2
I Cannot, Sleep, Eat, or Think 2
Appreciate 1
Hearts Token 1
My Pride 1
Something's going on 0
Tale of Romance 1
This Moment 1
Time Passes By 2
To See Me 1
You Treat Me 0
Your Buddies, Your Pals 1
Your Love 2
I can only wonder 0
The Mistake 1
This Thing Called Love 1
Your Memory 0
Give it back 0
No Explanation 0
SITUATION 1
ALWAYS THINKING 1
LET'S 1
LISTEN 3
Love Out-Grown 0
My Children 0
Should I 0
Some Kind of Trip 1
Thoughts of you 0
Without a thought 0
In The Mirror 1
What A SPORT 0
She is loved, yet unknown 0
DAUGHTER 1
WHEN I LEAVE YOU 1
Rush of Emotions 0
My Office 2
Way Deep Down Inside 0
Battle with Breath 0
Your Special Love 0
I MISS YOU... 0
A PERSONAL PRAYOR 0
FROM ABOVE 0
IF YOU LOVE ME... 0
Little girl in such a hurry 0
Silent Romance 2
Our Time 0
My Self Worth 1
My Guard Down 0
Listen to no voice 0
Example 0
HOLDING ON 1
MENDED HEART 0
What is Family for 1
Unforgettable Love 0
I Am Bitter 1
My Friends 1
Our Bond 1
Spellbound 2
Tonight 1
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Abuse 1
My Super Star 1
Trying to Resist 1
Hopes 1
Grandpa's Wise Words 1
Stage Player 2
Hard Headed 2
A New You 1
Reckless Heart 0
These Walls 2
Spirits Plead 1
Without a Word 0
Too Little, Too Late 3
Unselfish Love 1
You Treat Me 2
Your Memory 1
Think About It 2
Enemy of Mine 1
You Leave me Paralyzed 1
Now You Need Me 1
LOVE HATE GAME 2
False Expectations 1
Inside looking out 0
Our Struggle 1
NEVER ENDING DISTRUCTION 1
Famished 2
Love's Freedom 1
A Fools Denial 1
Dark Pit 3
The Invitation 1
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BLUE 2
CRYING HEART 1
SILENCED 2
FIND YOUR WAY BACK 2
All I Desire 1
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MOURNING LOVE 5