Macabre Dreams

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Inspired by a wonderful artist.

Macabre Dreams

Macabre Dreams

 

 

Nightfall slowly closes in

The shadows start to move

Enveloped in a chilling dim

Their reality to prove

 

The darkness covers all around

And vision fades to gray

The heat is drawn from hallowed ground

And the noises come to play

 

A voice? Then no

A creek in the wind

I swear it said GO!

In the dirt my feet are pinned

 

An apparition in the woods?

Or mist from a nearby bog?

LOOK there are marks where it once stood!

Left by a falling log?

 

Now the world is turning

Colors smear and fade

All around me is burning

I cower to evade

 

Falling I’m falling

With no touch down in sight

Now my psyche is calling

“Cling to me, Take flight”

 

Soaring, am I free from it?

I scan o’er all I see

Then dive into my brainpan

And to the daylight flee

 

 

 

 

 

                                                                           Paul Clark

                                                                           9/11/10

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Teardrops commented on Macabre Dreams

10-03-2010

Great poem full of bumps in the night . thanks for a great read Marie

jesterescapade

10/06/2010

Thank you . This was inspired by an artist friend of mine that just finished a painting of Edgar Allen Poe.

kmooney commented on Macabre Dreams

09-11-2010

Nice one Paul. I like the eeriness of it. Reminds me of a night I once spent in a graveyard, on a dare. It was an old and creepy one. I was very thankful to see the dawn break and was quick to leave. I swear something followed me though. It took me a couple of days to get over a feeling of being watched. Thanks for the reminder and share. Please read some of mine if you can find the time....Kevin (a friend of Spence...)

jesterescapade

09/11/2010

Thank you kmooney. I will read you as soon as I get the time.

SuSpence commented on Macabre Dreams

09-11-2010

Great read my friend, I read this one several times over, I enjoyed it so much you made me late for kick off Haha. 10 from me. Peace and Love, Spence

jesterescapade

09/11/2010

Thank you and GO USF. good game so far(halftime)

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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