liar

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    • freind
    • sitting here reading all you nice peoples poems.

    liar

     even though you pushed me to the side.
    the true feelings you harbor inside.
    the ones you are trying to hide.
    you are just fooling your self.
    you know you still love me so.
    i would like to know why you let me go?
    because i still love you so.
    you know you loved all the times we were together.
    now i am putting it all together.
    you were afraid to be loved. .
    by someone who really cared.
    if i paid to much attention to you.
    then that was my fault.
    but you should of liked it.
    but i say this to you.
    remeber all of the good times.
    know how good you had it.
    i will miss you so.
    but anyway i will let you go.
    forget the past.
    it was ablast.
    i should of new it would never last.
    you whore.

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    Teardrops commented on liar

    09-20-2010

    You write with great passion and if you truly feel it say it . To hold it inside is not good thanks for the read Marie
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    freind

    09/21/2010

    oh marie thank-you so very much.i have had deaths in the family.that has pulled me away from many things. but i am glad to hear from you. i will read your stuff and let you know.keep up the good work

    honesty34 commented on liar

    02-25-2010

    wow ..sometimes this is exactly what i feel and i definitly felt the emotions in the poem..great writing...
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    Tempy commented on liar

    10-18-2009

    I enjoyed your poem. it was a great read and I imagine a great write. ~! ouch to the ending
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    freind

    10/22/2009

    thank you for the comments on my stuff.i liked reading yours as well

    Katylove commented on liar

    08-19-2009

    friend...I love the use of your langauge.. your poems show the different facets of your writing.. continue to post whatever words you choose...an continue to try on new words for size and shape.. and remember.. in the end.. it's how YOU feel about what YOU write that counts... 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10 10
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    freind

    08/19/2009

    thank-you katylove. you for that commentjust love ya you are the greatest

    MiaH commented on liar

    08-16-2009

    You whore? Do you kiss your mother with that mouth? What did she do to warrant being called a whore? Just wondering... Men, they say things like that about women just because the woman has found someone new that is better. Maybe she is a whore if she did it when she was actually with you but something tells me she did not.....
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    freind

    08/19/2009

    to miah maybe you should read some of my other stuff then you will se the true me

    freind

    08/19/2009

    yes i did kiss my mother with my mouth she is gone now. you must be a scorned woman we cant please everybody.this is called writing.not everything is true.thank-you.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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