angel

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    • freind
    • sitting here reading all you nice peoples poems.

    angel

    it started with a wink.
    then with a nod.
    next thing you know .
    we got a gift from god .
    a precious child we both loved so.when i looked away.
    you ran off another way.
    it broke my heart .
    as if you did not know.you
    you left me with a precious gift from god.
    if you never come back.
    you will never know ?
    what it is like to cherish.
    this gift from god.

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    Gusto commented on angel

    07-17-2009

    Heavy duty. Well wrote. I like the wink and nod beginning...then the ryhme of "..gift from god. " very nice.

    freind

    07/17/2009

    thankyou hope you gat everything in order.so we can talk thanks again for your comments

    fallenangel74 commented on angel

    07-05-2009

    So heartfelt and sad at the same time. I can feel the pain in some of your writing.

    organicchick commented on angel

    04-02-2009

    I have read a few of your poems.....you really write from your heart. That's what make great poetry!!!

    freind

    05/29/2009

    thanks for your comments on my stuff

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    freind’s Poems (22)

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    love 4
    brother 3
    poetry 1
    calm 0
    thoughts 1
    momma 7
    spirit of freedom 1
    days past 1
    missing 3
    angel 4
    son 1
    woman 3
    beloved 3
    feelings 4