Ironic

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  • Love
    • forbiddenlove
    • No matter how hard I try to let him go, his grasp on my heart is too tight!

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    Not my best by far......but truly is from my heart.  Hope you enjoy.

    Ironic

     I have a man whom I cannot love,
    I feel my love he is unworthy of.
    I used to love him with all my heart,
    Now I feel we'd be better off apart.
    I do not know if he'd ever let me go,
    One day I will try....this I know.

    Now with that being said....I cannot have the man whom I love,
    This is the man that my love he is deserving of.
    We were brought together by chance,
    And it that meeting found a special romance.
    Wishing many times that it was I he had wed,
    Yearning to be the one with whom he shares his bed.

    Ironic I guess you could say:
    I have a man whom I cannot love,
    Yet love a man whom I cannot have.

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    PoetChik commented on Ironic

    08-23-2011

    Great poem!! I know exactly how you feel... I Know in my case he will never let me go. So I live my life the same as you. Love is Cruel.
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    Tempy commented on Ironic

    10-18-2009

    I enjoyed your poem. it was a great read and I imagine a great write. ~! I hope your situation improves somehow
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    jademelissa74 commented on Ironic

    08-31-2009

    This poem reveals so much frustration from loving passionately with heavy restrains. Love is never meant to be chained to a pillar of salt. The reader can truly appreciate the sensitivity of the piece. At face value, it is heart-breaking. May your heart be freed from all burdens. I've enjoyed the poem. God bless.
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    forbiddenlove

    09/02/2009

    AHHH....I always look forward to your comments. They always seem to enlighten me. Thank you

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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