On This Day

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    • forbiddenlove
    • No matter how hard I try to let him go, his grasp on my heart is too tight!

    On This Day

    "On this day, I the wed"
    These are words we have already said.
    Promises to love and cherish the other,
    Never needing to be with another.
    The be there through the good and the bad,
    Never wishing the other to be sad.
    To cherish and honor all of our lives,
    Hoping no problems would ever arise.
    Whole-heartedly these promises we made,
    Believing our feelings would never be swayed.
    The first day we kissed I will never forget,
    At times we should, but feel no regret.
    The passion I feel when you are holding me,
    In anothers arms I never want to be.
    The promises we made, at the time were not in vain,
    But to the others how do we explain?
    "On this day, I the wed"
    Yes these are words we have already said.
    Promises we never meant to smother,
    but these promises were not made to each other.

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    gallaxy commented on On This Day

    08-20-2009

    A good poem it is. Something we all believe a relationship should be. But the sad fact is in these times, people lie just to get what they want. Good job on "On This Day"..........

    forbiddenlove

    08/27/2009

    Thank you so much for you comment.....It really means alot to me.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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