Me and You

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  • Love
    • forbiddenlove
    • No matter how hard I try to let him go, his grasp on my heart is too tight!

    Poem Commentary

    Most people do not agree with the situation spoken about in this poem, but the one thing I learned is that your heart does not always do what you know is right.  Please don't judge me for I did not ask to fall in love with this man (actually fought it for years).  All I ask is you rate the poem and leave feedback.  Thank you.

    Me and You

    There is never a dull moment with me and you,
    Excitement in all that we do.
    The high from the possibility of being caught,
    Even though a hard lesson would be taught.
    You say you love me and your words I believe,
    But it is clear that her you will never leave.
    I held out hope that one day you would see,
    That I was the one with whom you were meant to be.
    The fear that you showed the day she came home,
    That is when reality chilled me to the bone.
    There will never be more to you and I,
    Yet I continue to try.
    One day I will be gone though I don't know when or how,
    But that will be the day you step back and say WOW!
    Wow to the fact I would have given you my all,
    Not to mention the greatest sex at your beckon call.
    I cannot leave you on my own,
    But all you have to do is ask and I will be gone.
    Anything you ask of me will be done,
    Even if it destroys me in the long run.
    Untill then I will continue in the things that we do,
    Making the greatest memories of me and you.

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    Charlie23 commented on Me and You

    08-27-2009

    I think your poems are beautiful, even though it appears the circumstances are not. Another great write!

    forbiddenlove

    04/27/2013

    A few years late but thank you so much!

    AshRenee commented on Me and You

    07-15-2009

    Aww, this is sweet. Bitter because of the wife (?), but still so loving. I hope things worked out for you, because even though cheating isn't something I agree with, there's something about this love that makes it ok for me. So, kudos to you for tweaking my views a bit

    forbiddenlove

    07/16/2009

    Thank you. I portray my feelings better through words and I have found that writing is my best relief.

    ccslim commented on Me and You

    07-14-2009

    wOOt! What a true depiction of a lover hung out to dry and left behind knowing what was left was more than what meets the eye! Sweet write by content and flow!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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