In her Eyes

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    In her Eyes

    In her eyes there’s wisdom.

    And talent we can’t see,

    In her eyes there’s longing

    For us to set her free.

    In her eyes we’ll see her

    Running in the wild,

    A playful yearning loving heart

    As if she were a child.

    In her eyes we’ll see her

    Begging for release,

    A hope that he will love her

    To giver her hope and peace.

    In her eyes there’s many things

    For what we do not know,

    In her eyes we'll see her beg

    Oh please just let me go,

    And set me free.

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    kdarcy commented on In her Eyes

    11-21-2010

    There is much to see in the eyes, what have the eyes taken in ... mirrors and windows, nice write my friend, be well, stop by if find a free moment k

    Shadowwalker

    11/23/2010

    I will stop by my friend. Been pretty busy. The eyes are the tell tale of all. I guess it depends on what you are looking for within them.

    Teardrops commented on In her Eyes

    11-12-2010

    Ilove this in so many ways for the eyes are the windows to the soul and tell many stories thanks for the read Marie

    Shadowwalker

    11/13/2010

    it was my pleasure to submit this piece. I am so glad you enjoyed. SHadow

    StandingBear commented on In her Eyes

    11-12-2010

    Shadowwalker, you've a free flowing, well balanced style that is pleasant to read. SBear

    Shadowwalker

    11/12/2010

    TY so very much glad you enjoyed Shadow:)

    koolmom0 commented on In her Eyes

    11-12-2010

    This is a beautiful write. There is a lot to see in ones eyes. Thank you. :) Rita

    Shadowwalker

    11/12/2010

    ty so much... the eyes are the window to ones soul. Glad you enjoyed. Shadow :)

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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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