Illusion

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    Illusion

    Edge of illusion
    Caught by the light.
    Glimmer of freedom,
    Lost with the fight.

    Traces of passion,
    Given with grace.
    Some kind of fear
    Left on your face.

    The look in your eye,
    The rage in your stance.
    Total evasion
    Of every glance.

    Walk on the edge,
    Hold your head high,
    And pray if you fall
    That you learned to fly

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    gferrisjr commented on Illusion

    11-25-2009

    This was very good poem. Excellent work. I enjoyed the read Gary

    Most commented on Illusion

    09-09-2009

    dooooooooope! fiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! the shitzzzzzzzzz! fa sho! like it alot!

    nativetinagirl commented on Illusion

    06-25-2009

    sums it up beautifully in few words. I like this. cuts out the verbose.

    Alexa commented on Illusion

    02-26-2009

    i really enjoyed this om a gut,visceral level. Great job!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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