Given Up

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  • Dark Poetry

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    I mighttttttt add more, but I'm not sure yet...

    Given Up

     Quiet, Isolated
    you hear no voice but your own.
    Sad, Lonely
    no one there but you.
    Angry, Intimidated
    Why does this only happen to you?
    Resigned, Unwated
    You've finally given up.
    A singe tear
    tracks down your face.
    Your heart throbs in your chest.
    Never ending spirals of dark
    Swarming your mind.
    Never going to find your way out,
    it consumes you.
    Have you given up so soon?

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    Flinker commented on Given Up

    10-14-2011

    You have a great pattern going in the beginning, I would be interested to see what you could do if you stuck with it for the whole poem.
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    LilliannaFenton

    11/06/2011

    I don't think I did...Dx But whatever. xP

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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