Am I?

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A poem co written with my friend Jessica. ^w^

Am I?

Can you hear me?
Can you help me,
Do you even care?
Am I the one you want?
Am I the one you love?
I think I am nothing to you!
Why don't you like me,
why don't you care?
It kills me to feel this way!
Get over yourself,
pay attention to me!
Can't you see I LOVE you?
Can't you see I care?
Why can't you be good to me,
is it really that hard?!
Why?
Why?
Why?!
Why are you doing this to me?!
Do you really hate me that much?!
If you're going to continue like this,
I just might kill myself.

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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