Escaped

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    Escaped

     You drap the blade across your wrist
    suck in a breath against the sharp pain
    you want to scream out,
    but you know they'll come running.
    It's all their fault,
    they drove you to this.
    As you continue to bleed,
    you smile.
    As your vision fades,
    you rejoice.
    You've finally escaped.

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    Flinker commented on Escaped

    10-14-2011

    Wow, very powerful poem. Great specific images too.
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    LilliannaFenton

    11/06/2011

    Thanks, written in the spur of the moment, a fit of boredom.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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