Doubts

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Doubts

Having doubts
Is it so?
Can't help it,
don't want it this way.
Should we stop?
I hope not.
Don't want to
maybe we need to....
Can't stop loving you,
But I can stop seeing you...

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Doubts

06-03-2011

I like the way your words flow they rhyme without rhyming, and that is cool.

LilliannaFenton

06/07/2011

Haha thanks! (: When I write, I write what I feel, and sometimes it rhymes, and sometimes it doesn't. :P I don't really care if it does either way. xP I try to write my emotions and I always hope that someone else will see what I wrote and they'll know that they aren't the only ones dealing with it. :3

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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