Epitaph

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    Epitaph

    Epitaph   

     

    Life’s candle flickered

    from tomorrow’s window

    while I breathed through frozen lips,

    and watched her final glow

    dim like a dream

    in the eyes

    of a fading firefly. 

    Yet in the shadow of time,

    her eyes will not be replaced by the sun,

    outshone by the moon,

    or bedazzled by the stars,

    for I will always

    feel the warmth of her soul,

    holding my heartbeats

    into the echoes of the night.

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    Poetster commented on Epitaph

    02-25-2011

    again, this is just something taken from my novel. Thank you for your kind comment.

    danmartyjake1 commented on Epitaph

    02-10-2011

    This poem shines with such divinity in love and devotion in life and in death, beauty and in all ways that the spirit can reach. Just beautiful. Loved it! A Favorite! Bless You!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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