Die a Virgin for Your Lie

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    Die a Virgin for Your Lie
    Earth, Wind, Water, Fire,
    Make this thief and a liar
    Turn into a bird of red sapphire.
    Pitifully displayed of all attire.
    Within three weeks ye shall take form
    And be any of any of the norm.
    Take your dreams and make them real,
    But don't forget how others feel.
    Be careful what your wishes hold.
    For they come back three fold.
    Ask for love and receive hate.
    Ask for friends and receive fate.
    Don't lie to friends or your kin.
    For you'll be punished for your sin.
    Watch you start to dissipate.
    You "I'm Sorry" but it's too late.
    Say your prayers and then you die.
    Die a virgin for your lie.

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    michelenastee commented on Die a Virgin for Your Lie

    12-15-2008

    Wow girl that was your use of the descriptions were awesome kee up the good work.
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    michelenastee commented on Die a Virgin for Your Lie

    12-15-2008

    Wow girl that was your use of the descriptions were awesome kee up the good work.
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    Allegra commented on Die a Virgin for Your Lie

    11-25-2008

    your poems are pretty harsh at times but I like them. You're a little more dark than anyone else I've read on here.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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