Cuz it Never Ends

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    Ok so this is actually like a song I wrote but songs are like poems with a beat to them right? I dunno... I didn't even think I wrote songs... So yea I really don't know what to think about this one... LOL 

    I hear a piano... i hear a soft steady beat on a drum... I hear... a soft almost speaking singer who can hit a few higher notes... I see a blank face speaking into a phone looking into a camera. I see the saddest deepest eyes with hair falling over the face… I don’t know it just kind of came to me while I was sitting here... I think it might still need a bit of work... but I've sang it out loud now like 5 times and it seems to flow pretty good… I think the verse needs help though it doesn't have an exact flow to it I trip up on it a lot... or maybe I just can't sing

    Cuz it Never Ends

    I sit here listening to you.... I don't know what your trying to do... all I know is I've got....  just one more shot… for what I know is true...

     

    And though we've been right here before... I'm wondering just what's in store... All I can see is what might be… and what I've waited for...

     

    So go on and do what you must do… You know my heart belongs to you… I know you know these words are true… Let us do it all again, Cuz it never ends…

     

    And when you look at me this way.... I just want to hear you say.... that you want the same… and feel this way… and everything’s ok...

     

    And we do it all again… And we know we’re more than friends… Soon we will see just what’s meant to be… Cuz this feeling never ends…

     

    So go on and do what you must do... you know my heart is just for you... and if we fall apart, it’s just a start for trying once again...

     

    I know that these words are true... I know I'll always be in love with you... I know that we will see… how it’s meant to be… Cuz you and me will never end…

     

    Hold me baby once again… Show me how you understand… Take me by the hand lets watch this begins, and see just where this journey ends….

                         

    So go on and do what you must do… You know my heart belongs to you… I know you know these words are true… Let us do it all again, Cuz it never ends…

     

    Cuz my heart belongs to you... I know you know these words are true… I know you feel the same… there is no game… and let’s let each of us be two…

     

    So go on and do what you must do… You know my heart belongs to you… I know you know these words are true… Let us do it all again, Cuz it never ends…

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