Because of you

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    I'd like to think that we could make someone feel just a little better if we offer a smile, a gestor it will be okay.
    A little piece of mind. The thought someone out there cares. When our house burned  down we lost everything. Not that long ago, a friend put a smile on my face. We had our lives, our memories. It will be okay. We lost our best two little friends our pugs. With a broken heart we made it through. With a hug and a smile. It will be okay. God bless people like that.

    Because of you

     There is a smile on my face
    Every time you walk by
    It softens my troubled heart
    Brings joy to my soul
    Happiness fills the air
    My troubles are forgotten
    If only for a moment
    You are a very special
    Brought into my life
    You remind me it will be alright
    A hand shake a hug  brightens my day
    Reminds me how much you care
    Trials  can disrupt our day  
    When I look at you it reminds me
    To keep the  smile on my face
    Who knows who I might see
    I just might make their day

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    Teardrops commented on Because of you

    12-09-2009

    wonderful poem thanks for letting me read it nice write
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/18/2009

    Thank you I am glad you liked it.

    SILKYTWEED commented on Because of you

    12-09-2009

    Beautiful Write....very simple but profoundly cheerful....Thanks for sharing!
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/12/2009

    THANK YOU CHeck out he bug

    Bettysrainbow48

    12/12/2009

    THANK You

    bloomingsun commented on Because of you

    12-08-2009

    The love of a friend can brighten any day, lighten any load... It's the things you can't see that matter most, and that can't be taken away. God bless...
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/12/2009

    THANK YOU SO Much

    HarverTomsson commented on Because of you

    12-08-2009

    People are more important than things. You have a wealth within that many never will know. God bless you, HT
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/12/2009

    YOU GOT THAT RIGHT CHECK OUT THE BUG

    WinterFrost commented on Because of you

    12-08-2009

    They say if you make yourself be happy you will be happy. I'm not so sure of that but a smile usually gets smiles back. Be happy and do good work Winter
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/12/2009

    Thank you so much check out the bug

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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