My Sprit

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    There are reasons for everything in life. Finding the good through the bad helps keep us strong.

    My Sprit

    Though sometimes sadden by life's challenges
    Puts life burdens on my mind and soul
    Brings forth an inter beauty
    A rose waiting to bloom
    A worried spirit grows stronger
    From the challenge of it all
    Much giving with out taking makes you soar from the heart
    Two souls meet forever connected
    Joined by God forever  your friend
    Forever buds blooming in harmony
    Renewed presence endured  strength
    The waiting well worth waiting for
    Letting go brings a sadden heart
    Joy will return not forgotten
    When our spirits meet again

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    SILKYTWEED commented on My Sprit

    12-07-2009

    Beautiful Write....I'm captured by this write, what a wonderful embrace of words....Thank You!
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    WordSlinger commented on My Sprit

    12-02-2009

    hmm, I love this, I write in this theme also, good huh, :) Welcome to OP, and thanks for your comments.. WS
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    BigDaddyCash commented on My Sprit

    11-19-2009

    I collect thoughts and Ideas from all the wonderful people I know. Each thought puts a stroke on there magnificent portrait. When there portrait is finished I hang it in my gallery of extraordinary people. My gallery grows each day and the paintings are priceless. Each day I look for the best in the people I love. When I see their God given talents, I’m thankful to share the gifts these amazing people give to the world. I feel blessed just to be in their presence, to feel the ora of their existence. Your poetry has spirited the desire for me to paint your portrait and hang it in my gallery of extraordinary writers. Thanks for sharing your wonderful words. LOL, BDC
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    Bettysrainbow48

    11/21/2009

    Your so kind. What kind of a picture would you paint?

    Bettysrainbow48

    11/28/2009

    How are you? We are wondering if you have ever wrote any poems on the purity of snow? Beauty and purity.Your words would flourish with harmony.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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