Daddys Eyes

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    This is a story about a little girl who's daddy had a heart attack. She was peering out a window at  a shiny bright star with a quarter moon. A little girls daddy told her he would be there if she ever needed him to look at the star and quarter moon. It would remind her he loved her and it would be alright. Daddy was there. This to would pass.

    Daddys Eyes

     It was on a clear night 
    Peering towards heavens door
    Her daddies heart almost took flight
    The little girl ran for help looking up
    Saw a star quarter moon in sight
    Brought back to her delayed in flight
    With a  big star qaurter moon  in sight
    She remembered it always
    It was daddies promise to come back
    Daddy passed in time
    Heart broken she remembered his words
    I'll be back I'll be right here
    Many times in life trails came her way
    A feeling she could not take
    Finding the right answers lingered painfully
    When looking toward  heaven
    She saw the quarter moon and star
    Daddies way of saying he'll be back
    It brought comfort to her heart
    She remembered what he had said
    When the stars shines
    I'll rock your heart with the moon
    Daddy will be there it will pass
    She only saw the star quarter moon
    When she couldn't find her way
    There to remind her it will be okay.
    Daddy will be there 

     

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    tierra7 commented on Daddys Eyes

    01-07-2010

    awwww Betty, this was too Sad...but soooo Beautiful...tears escape me..as i think of my children.....Daddy's are always our heroes...even in their absence...this was absolutely Beautiful Namaste...Terra @}-'-,.- (10+ )
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/09/2010

    There is wisdom in your heart thank you.

    Mareann commented on Daddys Eyes

    01-07-2010

    What we see in daddy's eyes often tell us a life long story-- I read so much into my daddys eyes, he was a man courage and strength! I loved him so! Mary
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/09/2010

    Yes I really loved my dad too. He was a wonderful person.

    gogant commented on Daddys Eyes

    12-22-2009

    Ahhh, Betty, all dads around the world, and on Mars too, would be so filled with happiness to hear these words from your beautiful poem...........................................................gogant
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/09/2010

    You remind me of one of the fathers who loves his children and knows how to show it. Thank you

    mangeoart commented on Daddys Eyes

    12-22-2009

    Hi, Betty. You have a truly sincere poem here, and very lovely indeed. You might want to correct daddies to daddy's.......just a thought.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/22/2009

    You are so right thank you

    Bettysrainbow48

    12/22/2009

    Sorry typo I need a new key board but thank you My ddd key sticks

    WordSlinger commented on Daddys Eyes

    12-22-2009

    I love this, priceless, and you have slung this, wow I'm very impressed, this line here Betty is so good, ///I'll rock your heart with the moon|||, whoo nice, ty WS
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    Bettysrainbow48

    01/09/2010

    I really appreciate your thoughts. It means a lot to me.Thank you

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

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