Empty Arms

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    I dedicate this poem to  the love lost in War. Within hearts carry them.

    Empty Arms

     It was snowing the day they met
    Their love was truly one one of a kind
    Soul mates becoming one as the clouds meet the sky
    Untouchable radiant penetrating souls
    They did everything together they did it all
    Joined at the hip they called them
    Spending every waking moment together
    Their love only grew stronger with time
    It was snowing the day he left army bound
    He sent letters she waited for everyone
    Her heart carried his love deep inside
    Cradled warmth from his letters kept her strong
    His letters stop coming
    He didn't return
    She cried weeping profoundly carrying her broken heart
    She grew old still his love was strong within her heart still lingered
    Reading every letter one by one over and over again
    One night reaching out for him closed her eyes and died
    Out side the window it was snowing
    There he was with open arms to meet her

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    kdarcy commented on Empty Arms

    11-30-2009

    I'm one for a romantic tear every time. Life happens that way, count the days knowing loves each and every way. Be well, k
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    Bettysrainbow48

    12/02/2009

    THANK YOU HOW ARE YOU? CHECK MY LATEST OUT CALLED ENOUGH.

    BigDaddyCash commented on Empty Arms

    11-21-2009

    Life is a merry-go-round of memories played to the symphony of lost dreams. Death brings back visions that never reached the dream world and what could have been becomes a reality. It's all written in the words of a song. Let's call the song Empty Arms.. Thanks for sharing another wonderful verse. LOL,BDC.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    11/21/2009

    Ok Lets do. I want to hear the song. You write it!Good idea.LoL

    Bettysrainbow48

    11/21/2009

    Lets call the song empty arms .Gotta tune?

    Bettysrainbow48

    11/30/2009

    SORRY ABOUT THIS STICKY KEY BOARD. IT SURE DOES CAUSE ME A LOT OF TYPOS.WORE OUT I SUPPOSE. LOL

    sherry122 commented on Empty Arms

    11-19-2009

    Owww….that’s a beautiful sad ending, sometimes beautiful memories make the sad part beautiful…,and your words brought the story out well.
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    Lolee commented on Empty Arms

    11-12-2009

    This kind of reminds me of the old movie "The Ghost and Mrs. Meure." I love what you have done with this one. Lovely.
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    Bettysrainbow48

    11/17/2009

    Thank you very much.I like to rate others work. I will look in on yours.

    gogant commented on Empty Arms

    11-02-2009

    A profound piece of literary genius. Truly wonderful......................................................g
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    Bettysrainbow48

    11/03/2009

    Thank you very much. I appreciate it.

    Bettysrainbow48

    11/03/2009

    Thank you I appreciate it.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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