Take My Hand

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    I would rather believe having a chance then to not and find out in the end he was right. I believe.

    Take My Hand

     Take my hand
    Trust me
    I'll take you there
    In a world where you'll find piece
    A world where needs are met


    The soft touch of your hand
    Reminds me
    Of your presence

    In the world we facet
    Two gems
    The pebble of a rose blooms
    Like the ruby in stone
    Of who I am
    I am that I am
    Like the yoke of an egg
    The trinity within
    We are as one
    Working together
    For you

    The foot steps you take
    Know that I will walk with you
    I will carry your heavy load
    If you just trust in me

    Look not unto an empty world
    You'll find each other in mine
    I died so that you may live

    You will see again
    You will hear sounds of my voice
    Music to rejoice
    Praises to sing
    You will rise up living

    Your crippled soul will flourish
    Your wounds will be healed
    Your heart happy once more
    If you believe in me

    I believed he took me there
    There I found you
    With an angel that said
    You believed
    You had faith
    You trusted in him

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    BigDaddyCash commented on Take My Hand

    02-15-2010

    I think I've danced to this RHAPSODY but only in my dreams. Your poetry of love indicates that you've been there, had the questions and found the answers. You always find just the right words that blend together in rhythmatic harmony. Lol, BDC
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    SBOYD commented on Take My Hand

    02-05-2010

    I ENJOYED YOUR POEM...IT IS A VERY UPLIFTING POEM. IT MAKE YOU BELIEVE IN YOURSELF....
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    gogant commented on Take My Hand

    02-04-2010

    Believing in someone, is the strength one needs to carry on through life's walkways..............A nice one again, Betty.............g
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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