Alone

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    Alone
    I am crying, I am scraping. I am alone. What do i do? No friends, no parents, no life at all. Desperate, cold, depressed, and alone. My feelings locked up inside. Torn apart. Do you know what it's like to be who I am? To be so sad, and yet be very bad. At the same time feel like I must die? Being someone I amnot. Pretending to love when i canot. Of course it is me, who is so lonely. Who cant evan feel what happiness is. So I say to myself. What is the point, what is my life? I am crying all alone.

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    hoth2o commented on Alone

    08-06-2009

    Life seems to have so many complexities as a teenager, but trust me, there are people out there willing to help you through these trying times. I live by this saying, "When you have a problem, look for the gift". There is one...
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    Tempestlady commented on Alone

    07-16-2009

    Call a helpline, a girlfrend, send me a pm. Everyone feels this way sometimes. I think this will be wll recieved because alot of people can relate. What it lacks in rhyme, and form it makes up for with impact. Good write.....
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    Theotorman commented on Alone

    06-18-2009

    This has a nice flow to it. It also captures an innocence and simplicity that works well. And it does convey sadness.
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    Bladebearer commented on Alone

    02-22-2009

    Lovely.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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