A Painful Love

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    A Painful Love
    Love is give and take,

     So we think;

     But love gives and never takes.

     LOVE, loves inspite of;

     Love hangs in through good or bad.

     Love is a warm fuzzy feeling,

     That's not true!

    Love is shown and put into action.

     Love never hides or covers up,

     Love is seen so others may know.

     Deceitful love crushes the spirit,

     But determined love nourishes the soul.

     Love is sometimes painful,

     Love is never full of sorrow.

    Broken hearts feel like there's no tomorrow;

     But God's love heals for hope of a tomorrow.

     Love Hurts So Deep.....Sacrifice is the key!

    A Painful Love for someone in pain!

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    wheelsal commented on A Painful Love

    07-05-2009

    Nicely said but try breaking this into shorter lines and see if you like that better. Keep writing..
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    Trea

    07/06/2009

    I Thank You for the comment and I took your advice and I do love it better. As long as God allows me to keep waking up, I will keep writing...Thank You again.

    rossmangeles commented on A Painful Love

    07-05-2009

    This is a great write. I love how you select and put the words in proper places. Very poetic with message so powerful. Keep it up! Cheers!
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    Trea

    07/06/2009

    I Thank You for the wonderful encouragement. Thank You for reading my poem....Have a Blessed Day!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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