Open Up the Door

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    Open Up the Door

    I yearn for the man I first knew;

    I know time has added some scars;

    For I truly love the man that's deep inside,

    I pray that he will open up so that I may show my true side.
    O' how I long for the passion we hold so deep within,
    Knock, Knock, Please let me come in;
    For I long to be one with thee,
    Let our love be an overflow for others to see.
    I just want to be a part of U!
    See me for Me; Not for who I use to be!
    All I want is just U!
    Please allow the door to open so that I may feel the best part of U!

    Open Up the Door, Please, for my heart longs for the person deep within U;
    Because your true Beauty is deep within!

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    orsonav commented on Open Up the Door

    07-24-2009

    This is romance at it's best. This poem is full of passion from begining to end. Overall, It is a wonderful piece of work that highlight the element of having to breakdown walls and barriers. Great Job!
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    Trea

    07/27/2009

    To God be the Glory! I truly Thank You for reading this poem. I grateful for the comment you gave about this poem. It's true that out of your pain can come wonderful things. Thank You again! Keep on reading and I will do the same.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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