YOU TELL ME POETRY???

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I GOTTA LOT TO LEARN AN LONG WAY TO GO, TO CONTINUE MY GROWTH. DAYS GETTING OLDER, A FEELIN OF I HAVE NO CHOICE.

YOU TELL ME POETRY???

Now this is my passion, able to express

Quauity in words, with fashion,

Uplift the lives, of many around me.

Smiles not only brightin ur lyfe, but also

Ur friends an family.

Stop making decisions, off past experiences,

Live new, an start new experiences.

Don’t block the people u run into,

They hold presious keys to ur mental.

Able to see lyfe more simple,

The hate die quick,  jealousy is a prob

No man can fix. It lurks an lingers, to make others sick.

Well I sick of being persuaded by fake.

They say they know you. Like ur life is an open gate.

Letting everybody in, can be ur end. Brain self consciously

Picks up convos, so I a thought never intended, seeks on in.

Got us doin things we weren’t meant to do, but we do, so we say it was meant to,,
Do.

Let go of the world, an feed ur inner man, he see things ur worldly eyes cant.

Pressured by pressures in the earth, remember ur not forced to do nothing by anything that’s cursed.

FOOD FOR THOUGHT: LIVE UR LYFE RIGHT…DEATH DOESN’T JUST COME INNA HURST.

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DeepEclipse commented on YOU TELL ME POETRY???

02-03-2010

"They say they know you. Like ur life is an open gate." - Hell yeah tell em. The mystery goes way beyond the surface. They belive their lying eyes. Good inspirational piece. Rise up and above and see how much lies beyond the simple hills. "I'ma start takin care of me! ME! Cuz it's about my friends and my family, from now on.... ...until i'm gone." - C-lo

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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YOU TELL ME POETRY??? 1
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