Self...

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Self...

sumthin, is makin me smile,
its that person i aint seen inna while.
teeth always shinin so bright,
you never know this person, has so much strife.
they are learnin how to walk right.
in this life , with everyday fights.
they want let the rain, take there sunshin away,
they are proud to stand in the struggles, they face today.
nomore letting people guide there life.
cuz only they no them, and what really right.
nomore confusing thoughts, that lay in there head.
they just live for today, and always plann ahead.
who is this person , thats sounds so free.?
as they smile at the mirror,
I realized it was my new ME.

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RyneishaB commented on Self...

06-18-2009

awww...man this right here is hott...i love it...it reminds me of myself...the new me...you tell yo old self "so long, farewell my lifes moving forward that ship has sailed" great job!!!

ThugsAngel commented on Self...

06-18-2009

That made me smile! Made me think of myself. We are all steady trying to improve. It feels good when you realize that that new person has arrived. Good poem.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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