struggles...!!!

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struggles...!!!

Y life gotta be like this, no water, no lights, ma dukes putting up a

strong fight,

But its to much money to live this life, and we cant afford it. Wanna live
above our means,

When I still haven’t been able to live my dream, I cant wait tho, so I

can give my moms everything she ever wanted,

Don’t want her to struggle no more, it hurts my heart and my stomach

fills sore.

The thought of everytime I get bread it goes here goes there, and my

moms money goes to bills, an still no lights nowhere. To much pride

she has to wanna give up, I commend that, she a strong real women

an dats wuz up.

Its time to finally change and set examples for those around me,

That life can be much better, than wat its made out to be…

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RyneishaB commented on struggles...!!!

09-03-2009

Wow...so many people go thru things in life and what ive learned recently is that its not about us, its not about our happiness or our comfort its about doing the will of god his purpose and plan for our lives, and then those things will be granted to us...Thank you for sharing this i can relate!!!!!!!! Amazing Write :)

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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THE REALIEST LOVE!!!! 1
YOU TELL ME POETRY??? 1
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to tha top.... 0
FREE 0
come up... 1
live ur lyfe!!! 1
EYES,CAN SEE. 0
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ONLY YOU KNOW YOU.... 3
NO SORROWS... 1
struggles...!
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LIVE TO LOVE.... 1
not the only one..... 0
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TAKE A RIDE!!!! 1
time... 4
in's and out's 1
never give up!!! 1
lost!!! 4
Self... 2
Rain!!! 2
HeartLess!!!! 1
peace!!! 1
UntiTled... 2
God rules everything around me.!!!! 1
let your heart speak!!! 5
wrong road!!! 5
within!!! 2
it not me!!! 7
the soul. 3
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contoll 3
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