in's and out's

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    in's and out's

    Outside,inside, outside in.

    Dealing these cards of life, hope I can win.

    Inside, outside, inside, out,

    Y do I live my life, wit so much dought?

    Crying  tears, have no way out.

    Playin a field, wit bases loaded,

    Time to change hearts, my last one exploded.

    Time to change ways, since I do the same things,

    Understanding the difference between u and i.

    Im man u women, their the reason y.

    Your love is emotional, while mines is action.

    Inside, outside, play the game wit fashion.

    But they keep askin, when u gonna blow.

    I tell the people , I don’t know.

    Hopefully in time, after, my heart unwines,

    And my mind gets in perfect understandin,

    With the line I am walking for my life.

    Then mayb ill have an answer, that would be right.

    so outside inside, outside in.

    only time will tell, until then imma just be patient.

     

     

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    jademelissa74 commented on in's and out's

    07-15-2009

    Wow! A wonderfully crafted dark piece. I love the way in which you cry out. It leaves the reader wanting more and more of the poem. Great job! I really liked this piece.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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