never give up!!!
Walking in the dark, walking with my heart, Walking alone, inna dead zone, Bodies lay everywhere around me, Of people that couldn’t find their way to the light. They gave up, to die in the dark, and stay away from the light. Like vampires afraid of the bright. the day comes about so fluidly , But the dark in the tunnel, shows lil opportunity. So instead of continuing with the walk, They die in self pitty, Few are crawling, cuz they see chances, I walk fast right past cuz I cant take any chances, Everybody goes thru trouble sum times. Its my inner will, that makes me pass thru mines. They’ll rather lay their, and give up, cuz pain hurts, Im just gonna keep on moving cuz the light brings SHINE!!! Im on my way to success, I start running, Cus its crunch time, The light at the end in dimming fast, I gotta move quickly, cant afford to miss class. Gotta get out the dark mind frame im in. As I keep going thru this storm, I realize at the end, The sun should be SHINING. Never give up, you never know whos watchin.never give up!!!
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markrohaley commented on never give up!!!
07-15-2009
- very nice young man. an thank you 4 the comment. there is a road we travel an at the crossroad of choice an eternity will one day dawn-forever either right or wrong? chose God an live :) la ya man
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